All Comments on 'Good Neighbor Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Deja Vu?

Not that I'm complaining, but I could've sworn I read this story some time ago.

PaladinInBlackPaladinInBlackabout 5 years agoAuthor
Re: deja Vu?

Probably on a different website. It's been up there for a while.

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionabout 5 years ago

Great story and great humor!

happyjack921happyjack921about 5 years ago
Smooth

Awaiting next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
continue please

please continue . instead of 4 he is going to have 8 with the 4 new women . what are the 4 that came out of the boxes , black , Asian , latino , what other races ? how many boxes are there 4 or 8 does that place have a basement ? it's going to be fun finding out what else is going to happen ?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Deja Vu?

Found it on Mcstories at https://mcstories.com/GoodNeighborPaladin/index.html

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Right after the "ATM" is an obvious mistake, but FAR from the first!!!

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I like to write, but I'm better at starting stories than at finishing them, so I have a rather large pile of unfinished stuff spring around. Most of my stuff is 'happily ever after'. You've been warned. FYI: I have posted a lot of this under a similar name (without the 'InBla...

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