All Comments on 'Good Neighbor Sam Ch. 02'

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KrvnikKrvnikover 8 years ago
1 star

And then Gil left her stupid ass and she was an outcast forevermore, because if you think white people are racist towards half-breeds, you've never met a Japanese person.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Mrs. Wilson

Is Mrs. Wilson going to fall victim to good neighbor Sam?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ridiculous Cuck Bullshit

Needs a little editing, some comments from Sam were actually from Gil. None of the men in these stories act like ANY men I know. In real life, Sam would have been shot "breaking and entering" a long time ago. And frankly, the fact that he is black doesn't really matter, there are plenty of white and Hispanic dogs out there too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
let him have his fun

let the writer have his fun becuz he would never be able to do this in real life. its his way of getting back at 'the white man' for 'keeping the brotha man down' since he cant take responsibility for his own lot in life. let him wallow in his little fantasy world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The story is and has become totally unbelievable.

tatooed in record time.

and not one husband has shot sam yet... and they should band together and get him paying child support and leave those wives.... let them pay the rent.

no stars... there are no characters that are even remotely intelligent nor have any redeeming value.

waste of time... will not read anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
How Many

Good Story. How many more wives to be knocked-up. Are any sisters or Mom's to be knocked up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice work

Maybe the wives, now all mothers, can pledge to be a Black only committing that any future kids will also be from Sam. The hubbys can be loyal facilitators by getting snipped. Have more women join the neighborhood ranks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
enjoyed it (as usual)

here's hoping you have more wives interested in making a change... or a visiting sister or sister in law...

keep 'em coming!

RA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved Sam and Suzi, and Kelly, etc.

Loved the dialogue and the flow of the story. Please write more! The pastor's wife is due for her own tattoo and a black baby bump too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
needs another sequel

The neighborhood needs a breeding party where the husbands all watch as one or two of the women are fucked by Sam while ovulating.

brass9brass9about 4 years ago

Fantastic story! Please keep writing... I log in every week just to read your stories, mate!

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77over 3 years ago
Pregnant by Black Mens

Its TRUE... I've been with all kinds of Mens but ALL my kids Daddies been Black Mens. One look at my kids say who they Daddies been. :-) Black Mens GET the JOB DONE. Thats for sure. That because most wouldnt wear a condom or get one to fit and NEVER pulled out when they was in my pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Suzi should divorce Gil. Gil finally gets excited about making baby and starts vitamins, supplements, etc. and she intentionally makes a baby with Sam. Why should Gil pay for the baby. He was always adament about her Not getting pregnant with Sam. It stopped being a sexy story and became a story about a cruel nasty wife. Hope her Japanese parents disown her and Gil divorces her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

to krvnik: you've got that right. Her parents will disown her and shun her. Hope the other men in the neighborhood wake up and dump their whores too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Jedno z lepszych opowiadań - moją żonę a jest bardzo podobna do Gabrielle Santini rucha starszy wielki jak niedźwiedź i ma potężnego chuja i mnóstwo czarnego , mocnego , gęstego juksu w ogromnych jądrach i zawsze leje go do macicy mojej żony . Wychował ją już , a może dopiero cztery razy i nadal ją rucha . W naszej dzielnicy kryje również kilka innych i równie pięknych kobiet a jego dzieci biegają po całej dzielnicy . jego kruczoczarny chuj , jest bardzo pracowity i juksuje wiele białych pipek w naszym miasteczku . Ja zawsze zlizuję jego juks z pipki mojej żony , która po każdym jego kryciu , jest czerwoniutka , opuchnięta i piękna i prawdę mówiąc , nie mogę się doczekać kolejnej czarnej ciąży z czarnego , pięknego chuja i wielkich jąder

PenPal2001PenPal2001over 1 year agoAuthor

Can anyone translate and tell me what this anonymous comment says?

charliem100charliem10010 months ago

It probably says, "This story could have been great, but turned out to be crap".

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