by PMDlite
I think you have become my favorite writer. So believable. Well kinda believable but so well done.
Loved your story! Attention to detail was well expressed :)
Wish I had neighbors like that....well I do but very introverted. Always nice to have a fantasy like that and dream a little. Thank you for writing such an amazing story! 5 stars!
Good visualizations and use of language. I liked the story line and the swiftness in the way it flowed.