All Comments on 'Good Service: Appetizers'

by pinupkitty

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
I dont like how she was forced by the two blokes,

But that Mark seems an interesting chap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Excellent so far

Author writes like a seasoned professional. From a storytelling perspective, one of the best things I've read on this site. You are in the process of developing some real 3-D characters here. Can't wait to see where this goes.

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