by Tomtrouble
I like the way this is developing, Heather is a lucky lady.
Can't wait for the next part
Nice Story, love that she is under his control and in to being naughty. A little distracting that you flip between past and present tense and from third to first and back to third person point of view.
I had an affair with a guy once who would lick me, then enter me a little so as the crown of the head of his penis pushed the lips of my vagina overt and over causing me to cum three times. It would have been four had he not started plunging after the third time. I get wet dreams abt that every now and then.
Good storyline, but a difficult read because of the switches of tense and person. Get rid of the parts in the present tense and stick to third person and 3 stars would be 5.