All Comments on 'Goodbye Lori'

I've seen this tale before on the brentwood society tumblr (or at least a cut down version), but I was certainly glad to read it again. It's not often that I get to see a wonderful pet-play story, especially a hardcore puppy-girl one, so this story really played to my interests.

With well-flowing prose, a good premise and some steamy erotica, there's very little I can add to what I've said other than great job, keep up the good work ^_^

5/5 stars

Pathetic! What a waste of time.

if the masters role was reversed, TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm starting to believe that the indignant anons are trying to shame others into the fold a matriarcal control method.

If you don't like a story you are free to not read it, it's fiction and there are always real world horrors to direct your vitrol at instead.

Thanks for sharing the story, I liked it even if it was a bit short.

I loved this. I do hope you do a follow up. I wonder what Master will get up to with his pregnant milky puppy

Are you still alive?

I am indeed alive! I've also started a second story. I haven't been seemingly active because this story will be longer and I have no work ethic. :)

I will try to get it finished and posted soon.

-Brentwood Society

Good to hear that you're well and active. I was worried after the tumblr vanished.

I really enjoyed how you gave such a feel for what he's already done to her while still jumping into the story of her ordeal at one of the sexiest most degrading moments. Also you did a great job pulling me into her thoughts and feelings, getting to experience the overwhelming emotions of finally breaking, letting go of Lori and accepting the awful new life of Muffins. Really sexy.