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Anonymousover 1 year ago

WTF, I'm totally intrigued right now. Was the carney worker a hypnotist? Did this really happen to Danny? Or is this some kind of magical trick to show him the future? So many questions to be answered and I'll be right here waiting for them. You've definitely GOT ME HOOKED!!! Descriptive and very well written, this is first class story telling. MLF

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Former inexperienced farm boy who moved to the big city and picked up a LOT of experience, then many years later settled down to write about his adventures.

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