All Comments on 'Gordy Gets a Skirt Ch. 03'

I am surprised he even asked to leave instead of just walking back to change clothes

and if he doesn't surly he's smart enough to find the button that Stormy is using to activate it and get it away from her since he is believing her about the tamper proof collar especially if or when the any guy(or any one else) gets there I'm sure he didn't sign up to be turned into a cocksucker and would get shocked until unconscious

he must not be that committed to his girlfriend for letting it get this far in another woman's apt

This chapter didn't get the reception I hoped for and which the first two chapters did. Perhaps crossing genres isn't as sexy as crossing genders? Or perhaps this lone anonymous comment scared people away. (I doubt that.) I had planned more chapters and was exploring next story lines but let's address the supposed "issues" anon had.

"just leave" - He tried that. If you read the story you know it's impossible. And what you don't know because I didn't foreshadow, is that his clothes, phone, and wallet are gone. Consider the options.

"cocksucker" - this is not necessarily the story-line and not my preference

"not committed" - yes, if you read chapter 1 and 2 you get that backstory. This is not a new discovery.

"another woman's apt" - well, she's his boss. She's been strategizing for months, so it's no wonder her trap worked. Gordy is weak in character and thinks with the walnut sized brain at the end of his popsicle stick instead of the much stronger grey matter between his ears.

better and better

So this is just a male hate story.