All Comments on 'Gorgeous Geet: My First Experience'

by desilovewriter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Difficult read. You might consider an editor. English obviously isn't your first language, so get some assistance with the spelling and grammar.

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 5 years ago
Good for Her!! ;+))

I like that she was decisive.

Your English skills are still developing.

That is not an indictable offense.

Keep writing!

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