All Comments on 'Got To Get Home'

I thought the traffic jam was gonna be him driving up on his wife's car wreck.. so glad I was wrong.

Appropriately short (750) and sweet, plus since I’m out of town for work for a few days as I read it, it has special meaning to me. Great job, S&F!

Cute little tidbit! Im really not a fan of the 750 word drill but that was a good one!

Cheers

SAGE

Love's reward!

5

Well done! A very enjoyable mini story. Thanks.

Excellent. Short, sweet, we'll written.

Congrats to the happy couple.

A sweet 5.

ah boring........nothing here not much of romantic thought here where is the pizazz so you are a slam bam thank you type of romantic????

Sweet story with tender moments. It packs a lot into the constrictions of the challenge. Loved it. 'Nuff said.

Really anon. boring? nothing romantic? a) he's eager to get home to her b) she has taken time to get herself ready for him c) they are having a baby they have wanted for so long. Romance isn't all about chocolates and flowers, it's the need to be together, to share, to celebrate being home and creating a new life. All that in a mere 740 words is pretty damn remarkable :) 5 stars

Cheers, Andy

The 750-word stories aren't my favorite, but you do a good job with them. Well done, as always.

Very short and very sweet loving wife story in the romance section. Nice one.

Finally a real loving wife! 5*

Thanks Andy! And thank you all for taking the time to read this little 750 word offering, glad you enjoyed it.

Nice 750 word story.