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LtShiharamLtShiharamalmost 4 years ago
Helpful tip

Try to extend this and do this on Microsoft word first. 8 pages on word = 1 page on here

JaxRhapsodyJaxRhapsodyalmost 4 years agoAuthor
RE Helpful tip

I used microsoft word for mobile, it was about four pages if I recall.

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 3 years ago
Switched tenses

Kept switching from present to past tense and back again. Pick one and stick with it throughout the whole story.

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Jax Lazzo Rhapsody, just trying to get my stories known. This is essentially an experiment in my craft of writing. I will be trying different things here and there. I concluded this was on of the best sites, although pretty archaic, is simple to use. I'm trying to expand, lea...