All Comments on 'Gotham's Finest'

Well done, and well written! One of the most erotic stories I have read in a long time. Please keep it going!

Love time stop/asleep/hypno stories like this where either the girl is completely out of it or open to suggestion while she is being molested/kissed/licked/fucked.

So really enjoyed this story! Very descriptive as well as highly erotic. Look forward to reading more of this kind of story!

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I'm looking forward to seeing what John does next with his toy cop.

I love this story! I'm wondering what would happen next! Will John find a way to Use the hypnotic devise for himself and can still keep the policewomen under his influence and can he collect other women? I'm really looking forward to read more about the story! keep on writting! best wishes Andy

Great I hope you write more of this story

Are you going to write a part 2

Kudos, felicitations and well wishes to the author! Utterly enjoyable!

Loved the background and build up. Good to see the contrast when she regained herself. Hopefully more will be coming

when will there be more

I love the loser virgin mind controlling the hot babe premise. I hope you write more stories like this

Loved the idea of a young need being in the right place at right time

But it was surprisingly good, love the premise

You best!!! More!!!))