by Purveyor_of_Sin
But it was surprisingly good, love the premise
Loved the idea of a young need being in the right place at right time
I love the loser virgin mind controlling the hot babe premise. I hope you write more stories like this
Loved the background and build up. Good to see the contrast when she regained herself. Hopefully more will be coming
Kudos, felicitations and well wishes to the author! Utterly enjoyable!
I love this story! I'm wondering what would happen next! Will John find a way to Use the hypnotic devise for himself and can still keep the policewomen under his influence and can he collect other women? I'm really looking forward to read more about the story! keep on writting! best wishes Andy
Love time stop/asleep/hypno stories like this where either the girl is completely out of it or open to suggestion while she is being molested/kissed/licked/fucked.
So really enjoyed this story! Very descriptive as well as highly erotic. Look forward to reading more of this kind of story!
MenaTV
Well done, and well written! One of the most erotic stories I have read in a long time. Please keep it going!