All Comments on 'Gotta Pay the Piper Ch. 08'

Ya did it again, five stars This is like watching a routlette spin round and round as the ball bounces about. Where's the next chapter going. And damm it when will it be posted!!!

the writing and storytelling is good, but occasionally I get jolted by the callous approach to slavery and all it implies, I find it weird that the author presumes that humiliation is arousing for most people and that everyone is ok with beating another human being, etc. I wish all those wannabe dominators and dominatrixes would grow a conscience and couldn't sleep at night due to how they have treated people. Even if slavery is legal, it is still evil, and I find it hard to like the characters who act like it's right to beat and humiliate others...

Loving the story! Can't wait for more.

Now what? The world may never know. 5 BIG FAT STARS and a thank you!

Another great story including judicial slavery. Thank you

Another great chapter with our entertaining characters and good story advancement. Just such a fun read and you always provide your fans and readers with being able to feel exactly what your players are feeling. Thanks for you efforts. Cheers

5* effort as usual. It's good seeing Bas relaxing into his new role with Lenore by his side. Still going to be fun seeing his step- daughter and Robin get there comeuppance. I really enjoy your stories and thanks.

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Cheers

Great story aside, bonus points for anal realism.