All Comments on 'Grace Ch. 01'

by MissRileySapphire

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ham_sandwichham_sandwichabout 9 years ago
Intriguing beginning!

I suspect I know where this is going! Good work!

parawaparawaabout 9 years ago
An interesting start...

Maybe you should confound Ham's expectation and make it an unexpected spectacle.

fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
MissRS, Please feel free...

...To surprise all of us! I like how you are styling this story. And I am enjoying trying to figure out the tantalizing clues you emplace.

You miss-chevious scamp, you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Continuation?

Great opening! Will the story continue?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Am I ever glad

that I just found you today. I don't think I could have stood the long wait. I very much enjoy what i have read so far but I have to go read more now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Pudgy!

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