All Comments on 'Graduation Summer Ch. 01'

`Whenever I hear that song I think of my first girlfriend...

I loved the characters, storyline and the feelings of teenage angst.

Well done - a great start .

I enjoyed your story very much as it brought back memories of growing up in a small farming community in downstate Illinois in the late 1960's. Can't wait for your next release. Nice job 32aa.

I believe it was Jefferson Airplane that recorded "White Rabbit". Starship was the next iteration of the band. Good story though.

You're off to a great start here and I hope to be reading many more chapters of this story.

Could use a little more attention to spelling, grammar and word choice in places, but nothing that is too jarring or breaks immersion.

Well done, and I'm going to go right ahead and read the next chapter.

It would have been junior high school, middle schools didn’t catch on until much later.

A great start

Looking forward to learning what happened during the remainder of the summer before college. Is should be interesting.

Great start and so many similarities to how I grew up. Thanks for writing this. RT

Nice story - very well written by very good author. More please