All Comments on 'Grandad and Me'

by Enthrallyaa

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EnthrallyaaEnthrallyaaover 2 years agoAuthor

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Rassclaut, thanks.

EnthrallyaaEnthrallyaaover 2 years agoAuthor

I wish I could re-write this. The punctuation errors and typo's are horrific.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh sehr toll geschrieben, auch wenn du als Enkel nicht wirklich die Oma ersetzen konnst hasst du Ihn seine Männlichkeit für einen Moment wieder gegeben.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

enjoyable story

88girfriend88girfriendalmost 2 years ago

You can definitely edit and repost if you would like. I think the bones are here for really great story. I liked that the dad knew and was in on it. That was naughty.

88girfriend88girfriendalmost 2 years ago

You can edit and resubmit your stories as many times as you would like I. I have submitted several of mine twice and I still find typos from time to time. The story had great bones. I like the fact that the dad was in on it and sent his son anyway that was kind of naughty

AmI1UcraveAmI1Ucravealmost 2 years ago

How did the father conspire to get you to sleep with his father?

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