by Enthrallyaa
I wish I could re-write this. The punctuation errors and typo's are horrific.
Oh sehr toll geschrieben, auch wenn du als Enkel nicht wirklich die Oma ersetzen konnst hasst du Ihn seine Männlichkeit für einen Moment wieder gegeben.
You can definitely edit and repost if you would like. I think the bones are here for really great story. I liked that the dad knew and was in on it. That was naughty.
You can edit and resubmit your stories as many times as you would like I. I have submitted several of mine twice and I still find typos from time to time. The story had great bones. I like the fact that the dad was in on it and sent his son anyway that was kind of naughty