All Comments on 'Grandma Jolene keeps the Faith Ch. 01'

Keep going...

Poor editing job. You switched a number of times between first and third person, which really screwed up what could have been a decent story. Read over your work carefully.

that was some good stuff m8. keep it going if you please

Too bad step mom cannot bear children. Jack could soon be a father

The question was "What did I think about this story? I voted "I loved It!" It was well written and nicely paced with just the right amount of build-up. Future chapters are anticipated to be just as good or better.

Thanks for all your comments, and a special thanks for the critical comments being reasonable and constructively stated, and most importantly, accurate.

She deserved such a fuckiing bring back my m in law

Great grandma serie, thanks!

Thanks for the compliment, looking to add new stories soon.

Just finished the first chapter. Looking forward to the rest of the series.

"Wait a minute, Who just seduced who?"

5 Stars!!!

Short and sweet and hot and well told!

nice story!!