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All Comments on 'Grandpa was a Swinger Ch. 01'

by TWeston

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littlewilly1littlewilly1about 2 years ago

Can't wait for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really liked the tale you wove. You did lose track of your narrator’s voice .. first person mostly, jumped to third person back to first. 4.795 stars rounds up to 5.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

bring on the next chapter I love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So when might we expect chapter #2??

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Writer and editor of more than a hundred articles, short stories, and books. I love writing, and I write for me. I love to create fictional stories, putting people into circumstances I wish were mine. And I love to edit stories for other writers.