All Comments on 'Grave Digger'

Very enjoyable. The wife was faithful, the husband wasn't a weak man and the villain was slain.

do·​cent | \ ˈdō-sᵊnt , dō(t)-ˈsent \

Definition of docent

1: a college or university teacher or lecturer

2: a person who leads guided tours especially through a museum or art gallery

Messed with the wrong man!

5

A good story but not worth 5* , 4 at best. AAAA++++

You should have ended it after the unveiling of the portrait. Everything after was just plain silly

A great story about a real, powerful man who values ​​simplicity, honor, tradition, who takes revenge in good old style on a hedonistic, licentious perv that destroys families and human life. There hasn't been such a good story for a long time 100* !!!

Another fine offering from Sunshineman, great story with fabulous characters and a most intriguing story line I really enjoyed it. I have a tremendous loathing for those involved in human trafficking especially the trafficking and abuse of children so I figure that Rolando got off lightly. In my time I have encountered many a smug prick like this poison dwarf working the finance industry in Europe so well done Sunshineman you got the character spot on!

Interesting story about a very foolish wife. If I could make one suggestion, "decadence" should be "depravity"? The Spaniel was a vile creature.

Good story but her Gabe should have buried Carol with the spaniel’s painting of her for 24 hours. At a minimum All nude art work Carol going back to their college days should have buried in the 2nd grave before discussing any reconciliation. As for the trip to New York and it being a second honeymoon, that is just to hard to believe after the amount of disrespect Carol showed Gabe. The weak and total reconciliation ruined it for me. 2 stars

Fitting.

The original plan to dig him up doesn't make any sense. If alive, he'd go to the cops. Hadda go. But the torture? Not so sure about that. D

Excellent tale, well told! Keep 'em coming

Um. Okay...

Good story. It's "docent" not doshen".

I wonder why Gabe never took exception to the treatment he received from his wife. She never took action against Rolandos comments against her husband. She stood their smiling while Rolando insulted Gabe before a whole crowd. She broke the rule about her nude picture displayed in the open. She never stopped being a model for Rolando even though he broke the no touching rule several times. And so on. In the end Rolando got what he deserved but sadly I dont get the wife, why she was acting like that.

Should have filled both coffins

A few great moments like the dressing-down at the gala, but overall, the narration was a bit messy. Especially Carol, who came off as bipolar, switching from loving wife to snarling harpy at the drop of a hat.

It was good work the story was well written.

I did have a problem with trying to stop a wife from cheating by murdering the lover but yes there are some guys out there who do put their wife in the pedestal making them do anything to keep the wife.

Gabe should have turned Rolando to the Feds instead of taking justice into his hands. Though I do think the Spaniel deserved it.

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I'm disturb too that wives getting pissed off by husbands would find another phallus just to get even.

Gave it a 4. May have rated a 5 but I don’t like murder porn. He could have turned the phone over to the police and Ro would have suffered more than being buried alive. Gabe could be found out eventually and charged with murder.

The best part is this was written by the “Sunshineman” go figure hahaha

loved it

I know it's a story, but Carol was very wrong to get cozy with Rolando. She was an idiot if she couldn't see through him. Gabe gave him his just due, but should have beaten him unmercifully first. He got his, but luckily for her, she didn't get his, she got GABE'S!

Fantastic love story

Interesting and a good read. Poor old Gabe got stuffed at the end though, He's stuck with a wife who said, 'Cheating on you is the last thing I'd ever do.' But we know she was going to do it in New York. It's just a matter of time.

In my personal opinion this was a very good story, good detail without getting boring. A story presented well moved along well without getting lost. Thank you for such a good read. R. Bachman

I enjoyed it. It was well-written, entertaining, and interesting till the very end. Frontier justice works better than the judicial system or the court system. Why waste time? Thanks for the story, the effort and the time writing it.

Well written narrative and dialogue but some parts were either too long or disjointed. The extended explanation of their courtship added little to the overall plot lines. Some of the early years was beneficial, like the "rules" for her modeling and how that played in later. Otherwise, you could have gotten the same effect in half the space. We really don't get much insight into what's going on in Carol's head regarding Rolando until the end where, I guess, the narrative is from her point of view and indicates she may consider cheating? You also imply initially the painting is for their 20th anniversary and it will never be seen publicly like her pictures when she modeled in college. When the painting is revealed to the entire city, you overlook that major rule has been broken with no mention or consideration. Not a disaster, but could have been more. 4*

Great lead in. Loved the gala monologue. The remainder felt flat.

Wanted to like it more than I did. But somehow the characters didn’t quite make sense.

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Ronaldo was NOT as suave as you tried to make him.

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Carol was NOT as bright as you wanted her to be.

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And Digger was NOT as likable as you tried to make him.

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Plus…the plot was just a little too stupid.

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Still…it had the elements of a 5 ***** effort, but ended up a strong 3 *** or weak 4 ****

Does the fact that she never had sex with the Spaniel make her a faithful wife?

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Nope

only one grave occupied, whatta pity.

For stories like this, the artistry comes in the portrayal of enough disrespect to register a problem that warrants a reaction, but not so much that no reaction short of divorce is believable. I agree with others that say that she went too far to avoid blowback. Just the contrast between her OC manner of gathering up all the drawings of her in college and then committing to accompany her nude portrait to NYC for public display is way too far over the top. As with most of these stories, the female loses all credibility when she accepts a sleazeball and then eats him up. In this case, the sleazeball is nothing more than that and the author gratuitously piles it on at the end with the sex trafficking boogeyman. The story is about the relationship--the agreements, commitments, the understanding--between two people. Throwing the FBI onto the pile at the very end is absurd: it neither justifies the mc's actions nor adds anything to the story.

She was going to NYC for one thing and one thing only. She had made her decision, she deserves her reward. She knows where the body is buried, so she is in total control. Does a standup guy like the mc really turn his life and children over to a sleazeball eater? Plus leaving an empty grave in your barn is bad luck...

LWlurker

Well, just a couple of things. I would have told her I can't stop her from going to NY with her artist buddy, but she might not have a place to come back to after her trip is over. Who needs that kind of shit in ones life. The painting would go into the other grave. Show her and fill it in. Then sometime soon dig up the other grave and bury the body some places else. Who knows what the flakey wife would do or say when she got mad. Why in these stories don't the husbands come right out and tell their wives how they feel. Why allow her to embarrass him in their community by showing the painting? What did he do to deserve that? She would be living some place else after that little stunt.

Good story, but wouldn't the cops wonder why he had the missing spaniels cell and laptop?

Thanx!

Loklie

Great story. Even greater conclusion. LP

Carol would have to go. Ro puts his hand on her naked ass and she ends the session with a hug and a kiss? And why would she feel she could heave nude portrait of herself displayed without her husband's knowledge or consent? The bitch is unbelievably unfeeling. What are her 2 sons gonna feel having all their friends ogling their naked mother? She just doesn't care or respect anyone other than herself.

Great story with a very happy ending. It turned out that Rolando was even more vile and nasty than he seemed. Gabe wouldn’t have known of his plans for the women until he buried him and got access to his phone. If the asshole was truly claustrophobic, the covering of the plexiglass with dirt would have taken his sanity. Rolando was an evil little troll, and one who needed to be taken off the board permanently. His dying in helpless terror was justice for a lifetime of evil, not just his actions with Carol.

I do feel that Carol, although she didn’t sleep with Rolando, was cheating with him. The plans, against Gabe’s wishes, to go with him to New York should have earned her some punishment. The nude portrait should have been buried with the Spaniel. She was forgiven too quickly and completely after her actions, but I suppose Gabe felt balance had been restored by showing her how far he would go to save his marriage. Telling her that cheating on him would be the last thing she would ever do was perfect, with the added implication of the second grave.

Yep, now that is how one writes a BTB, the plot was well written and the story well executed.

I absolutely loved it. Well done!!!

Scores 5/5

Good story. But the wife got off way too easy for the amount of disrespect she showed her husband over an extended time. Only thing that saved this story was Gage burying the Spaniel.

Except for not punishing his wife in some way for her disrespecting and humiliating him, I liked it. Good tension.

Hooked

This was an ultimately disappointing cop out. It had a great start and strong evolution of the plot only to fail with an extremely rushed ending. Said ending completely unravelled the strong character that was the wife as she ended in such an insipid manner. The missing finale of this story should have dwelt upon the reuniting - or lack thereof - of what had been developed as an extremely close and loving marriage. The writer seems to have lost interest and could not wait to put "The End" to what could have been a 5.

4*. Thought the wife got off easy. The fact she wasn’t confronted about the dual naked modeling/painting was a huge oversight.

Sadly, the quality of editors here does not exceed the authors writing skills.

"Doshen" is not even a word. How did that get past a simple spell check?

I think you meant "docent".

This was so good I skipped to the end. Thank you for writing this. My criticisms are meant to be constructive.

It was a page (maybe2) too long. The details of their courting were excessive. There's no suspense with Ronaldo. The climax was anything but. How did Gabe justify having the emails to the police?

A good man, a silly wife and an abhorrent arsehole. Nice sensible and honourable tale well told. Thank you for your work.

After the way that Carol berated and treated her husband for taking offense to her seeming emotional affair with the dog he should have let fido take her to New York. She liked showing off her tits, well in a harem she could definitely do that or even the porno stuff. If she didn't need her husband's input on her inappropriate behavior he should have just let it happen. Story was well written and I guess it is customary on here for the wife to ridicule her husband for taking offense to how she acts away from him, so it is what it is.

The appalling grammar was atoned for by assaults on orthography.

The author displayed mastery of the Greengrocers Apostrophe's (sic).

Going out, not with a bang, but a whimper, we find “doshen”, the Arts and Crafts rendering of docent?

Other than that, Mrs. Lincoln, how did you like the cardboard stereotypical characters?

I don't see the need to learn how they met. We know they did, or else we wouldn't be here.

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Over a page-and-a-half of a four-page story and they're finally married!

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Carol was out of line accepting Rolando's over-familiarity with her, and disparaging of her husband.

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"My lovely Carol has told me that we should meet." - She's not HIS "lovely Carol," and she should make that clear. If she doesn't, then Grave Digger should!

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Why doesn't Cloe (Chloe?) file a paternity suit?

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"She had no plans to have sex with the Spaniard, but it might happen because of his charm." - Charm? What charm? He has all the charm of a garden slug.

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It took her several trips to bring her luggage down?

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@demander, I agree that the original plan to dig him up wouldn't work, but I think the torture WAS justified, just based on Carol and Cloe, and this is apparently something they've done before.

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I agree with the calling out of misused words. If you're going to use a word like "docent," look it up first! I think even spell-check would have caught "doshen!"

Interesting story. When planning revenge, did two graves for certain. Offensive painting and her archives ought to have occupied 2nd hole. Story would have been better, more POE-esq, without the temporary “air-hole” B.S. Wife gets off way too easily for her behavior and yes,!, her betrayal of her husband, family and of herself. Gabe is not dumb, continue to use the slut for sport until offspring is off on their own, then use 2nd hole for her farewell.

Story concluded,disappointingly, as the author seemed to be of two minds about the wife, whose behavior throughout, as observed by others, was most inconsistent.

Very enjoyable story worth every one of the five stars I gave it. You, however, are in desperate need of an editor.

Loved it except for one thing. You did not document all the groveling, shame, and serious ass kissing Carol needed to do to make it up to Gabe for her horrendous thoughts and behavior. Not that he would have wanted it but for her to sincerely get off her high horse and offer it. Gabe's last line says it all.

Interesting story that has the wife flip-flopping her own standards. After I agree that Gabe should have used more finesse to get rid of the snake in Carol's life but if entombing the Spaniel was his way of solving the problem permanently then perhaps the second grave should have been used for the nude painting after Carol knew it was no longer a worthy master piece. Gabe could have arranged for Carol to "discover" that there was not premier art show scheduled at the Met. And yes, they would engage a docent to assist the through the museum but I believe Carol would be just fine strolling through the two million plus works or the multiple locations. My favorite was the Cloisters.

A number of instances where the narration is less than crisp … actually, muddled. Liked the similarity of sneaky Euro artist borrowed from the JetEngine Whisperer tale!

I did think the Instant-Sex-Trafficking disclosure was way-extreme, but SSM2019 wrote himself into a terrible corner. If Ro had been less evil, Hubby woulda disinterred Ro and in reward, Hubby would be in prison for 20+ years for kidnapping! Might as well just let Ro bury him in the spare grave and let Carol get acquainted with Rolando’s Slim Jim!

4*

Ohhhh, Sunshine! That is one FINE story. Yeah, the BTBAAC and "ANON" cabals won't like it. They'll wail/gnash because Carol wasn't in the other grave. Seeing that other grave and hearing Gabe agree with Carol saying that, "...having sex with Rolando would be the last think I would ever do," would change her forever. It was better than electro-shock treatment or a time machine for curing Carol's burgeoning hubris.

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There are so many fine things to say about this story, that let's just sum them up in a single word: 'damnnearfreakingbloodyperfect'! Thanks for adding this fine story to your excellent growing body of work! Huzzah! 5++++++/5!!!!

Very distracting narrative technique, giving away the main plot device at the beginning, and then thinking the reader cares how the husband and wife met and courted and married. That had NOTHING to do with the wife's nude painting appearing at the local gala. So what was the point; are you getting paid by the word?

Of course there's the whole human character flaw that many LW writers appear numb to: how does a monster like Rolando charm and seduce an intelligent virtuous discerning woman? You reveal you own ineptitude or naivety when dealing with evil people. Evil people are real, the evil is substantive and harsh, and they are about as difficult to discern as a beef roast rotting in a refrigerator. You can claim that smell is aging, or ripening, or anything else you want, but most people know what putrid meat, and monstrous human beings, smell like. Rolando stunk, and Carol should have known very very early after meeting him. If Gabe keeps the stupid bitch he deserves whatever shit she dumps on him in the future.

But there won't be any future for Gabe and Carol. The police will start investigating Rolando's disappearance, they will determine that Carol's nude painting was a complete surprise to most people, that Rolando seduced some of the wives in the community, that there was some tension between Gabe and Rolando, and when they do an aerial infrared scan over Gabe and Carol's property they will clearly see the outline of a grave in a corral where no grave belongs. The Grave Digger should have known better, and done better. Marrying Carol will be the first mistake he made. Rolando's sloppy disappearance will be his last.

Thanks for the effort.

The story line deserves stars. However, what's the author's native tongue? Who's means "who is," he meant whose. It was his parents' house, not his parent's, unless one of them was dead. You have no idea how much these blunders (not blunder's) take away from the experience of reading of what otherwise might be a good story. And Doshent? Give me a break!

Bitch got away with being a total disrespectful cunt! Too bad. The frog got what he deserved.

Carol was just a pathetic piece of shit.

There were some shining moments but you didn't write Carol as worth anything.

Awesome future for the eurotrash, awesome! The graves were good too, although bodies should be buried free of implications to oneself.

Concept good but the delivery not so much. The wife should have had to pay a price also.

The story was not bad--probably worthy of a four, but the editing was perhaps the most note-worthy thing about it. I rarely see such a nice gaffe as your editors' [yes, plural] : "Rolando could sense her hesitancy to be nude around him and interpreted it in the most extreme manor." You failed to mention that Rolando went looking for a different residential building. I see that someone picked up on the closing gem: "Doshen.' As Ben Franklin once said: little leaks sink a great ship.

The author pushed the envelope until Carol showed herself to be a selfish bitch and Gabe revealed himself to be a man who accepted having an unfaithful wife. Fidelity involves far more than the relative behavior of penises and vaginas. Perhaps it is meant to be comforting that Carol and Gabe are together as the story ends, but who gives a shit about what happens to two unlikable characters?

A husband that's not a wimp. Good story.

A lot of time to consider how many lives he had destroyed and how it brought him to a stupid humiliating end. Much better than a quick finish. A fitting ending for Euro-trash scum.

There was another story that took place in a Southwestern art colony town, where the artist DID fuck the wife and painted a thinly disguised nude portrait (changed hair color, left pubes natural color) and put it on display. RG's "Another Love" was also triggered by a nude painting by the lover. I'm sure there are others.

Legio...why don't you stick your cabal up your ass, suck your wife lover's dick, and write us another one of your pussy cuck stories. In another word SHUT THE FUCK UP!!

not a wimp lol u need some more reading compensation. both those hubbies were wimpy. especially that was it Bob "if he just leaves town i can get back with my slut wife" lol killing a person does not make a person not a wimp. or a cuckold. cant leave without his wife makes him a wimp and weak minded. as for the story didnt like it. felt to much like a snuff piece like u enjoyed doing that to Rollie

The bitch should have been burned. Fuck you Legio. Posing nude for the Spaniel's portrait was the topping on her total disrespect for her husband. No recovery from that.

I'm not even halfeay through the family and personal history and my eyes are glazing over. I feel like one of those poor bastards who had to sit next to Robert Hayes in the movie AIRPLANE!

A very good story, which for me only has one unsatisfactory point: I think he closed the second grave too early!

There are plenty of positive inputs mixed in with the negative comments below. At times the story goes "cardboard" (a plagarized comment), sometimes turning preachy, the narrative and conversations get confused on consistent verb tense, homonym confusion using lying versus laying and rapped versus rapt (shall we try wrapped?) and intension versus intention, and some pacing issues - these weaknesses all contribute to a sub optimal final result. Mr. Sunshine, you still show fantastic potential and continue to entertain me as a reader (and bastard critic). More polishing and I'll sing your praises!

Keep 'em comin'.

Love the twist. Keep up the great stories.

All's well that ends well.

Could have been a great story with some editing. The writing was way too weak.

I actually liked this BTB story. So many other stories have the MC actually be cucked by the smarmy artist for several years, and at the worst someone decries the applauded artist at his well received art show. Burying alive? A little harsh, but better than crying in your mushroom soup.

Nope! It didn't do it for me. After all the disrespect by the wife, the idiot husband is breaking his back for her.

3***

Good story but too similar to a story “Dig Two Graves” by another writer.

There was entirely too many plot holes to navigate this story for it to be a smooth ride. Rolando the foreign perv seemed like a made of guy of all the bad traits in men that you rolled into this one guy. This guy was a slimeball, nothing more, there was no danger aspect to him and most women wouldn't go near him. With you having multiple women falling for his (charm) had me shaking my head, you obviously don't know the first thing about women. Hey I will never understand them myself either, but I can see bullshit and I had to wade through too much in this story. Your portrayal of the wife showing little to no respect for the husband was bizarre as he seemed like walking tall come back from the cinema in your description. Not saying that women don't do that, but that is a major red flag, that doesn't go away with the disappearance of Rolando. Is he going to have to disappear all the slimballs in the world to make his marriage work? That would mean millions if not billions of slimballs getting deep sixed for the sake of his marriage. Bah, I could go on, but alas it would probably take as long as your story to correct it.

Maybe he should not have used the second grave but, he should have kicked her ass out.

Very entertaining story.

It was a fun read for me. Really fine touch with the MC digging (HA) two graves.

Gave you 4⭐s.

Unfortunately, poor editor, unnecessary details, (Wow a page and a half of their history) and unusually stupid character behavior, can lead to lower scores, 😃😄.

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I guess all is well that ends well...

Does it for me, found it very entertaining

Good story. Thank you and keep writing.

@sbrooks103x,

Again this is not your story. You seem to think everyone should write stories that suit your wants and needs, (nits and picks).

Well guess what, the authors and the stories they write are written to please themselves. Not some generic has been. So get over yourself and leave your nit picks in your own little brain.

Very good story 4*, the grave thing was a little too far fetched to believe. But fitting for the scum Rolando!

Loved the storyline, Rolando got exactly what he deserved based on what had been doing with the human trafficking and then what he was planning to do to Carol and Cloe. The bottom line in this storyline is that you don't even think about fucking with the grave digger wife as he will bury your ass 6 feet under. I hope this author keeps writing, I for one fine the stories well written entertaining. Gets my 5 star vote.

Needs an editor to clean up the incorrect words and misspellings.

And a few lapses in grammar and tense.

A quite good tale till denouement, then it went off rails w/murder excused by quickly adding crazy stuff. Sure, this guy as written was a self-important jerk--but he also a talented, sophisticated artist; this was not some no-empathy sociopath who could resort to baby-selling, dumping ex-lovers in foreign brothels, & arranging porn gangbangs as revenge against a man whose wife he has yet to fuck. And said wife was no dummy, running a City Arts Program; she would have checked the plans in NYC. This was a darn good story that veered from subtle and artsy to redneck crazyland!

"Redneck crazyland"? No, you little cuck. Justice was done. Adultery is treason against the family, the bedrock institution of healthy civilization. When men and women stop protecting their families the resulting decadence ultimately destroys the health of the civilization. So, go wank your little pee pee and read cuck stories or "BTB" involving the "ultimate" punishment allowed by weak men, divorce.

If there is anything to criticize here, the "gala bit didn't work at all, and allowing the bitch to pose naked after he found out was absurd. As written, in that town he could have beaten the bastard nearly to death, and he would have skated. I also thought it was hilariously inappropriate writing to have the wife's first response to realizing that Rolando was buried in the cattle pen was that it was "demeaning". The bitch also deserved punishment which, in true LW fashion, didn't happen. Overall, "Carol's" character was inconsistently written.

Redneck and crazy so there. I love these types of realistic stories where the main character is portrayed as a strong, smart, and crafty individual who will do what is necessary to protect his family.

As a Private Investigator specializing in cheating spouses, I can assure you most REAL MEN (and WOMEN), will do what is necessary, within reason, to protect their family which is their wife and kids. I have personally investigated well over 1,000 suspected cases and supervised another 1,000+ of spousal cheating and most of those spouses, men, AND women, will do whatever they can to try and protect their loved ones.

It's not uncommon to see people take the necessary steps, either using logic or emotion or both to try and save their marriage and family. Very few people will sit back and "wait" for their marriage to implode.

In this story, we saw a man who identified the problem (Rolando) and addressed it in a logical manner (at first) and then after hearing about the sex trafficking, allowed his emotions to take over. Regardless, he identified the problem and dealt with it. Do people deserve to die for cheating??? In most cases, no, they deserve to have their lives turned upside down and not profit either financially or emotionally from it, but not die. That's why it was a nice touch, albeit, a long stretch of the imagination, to throw in the sex trafficking angle. While somewhat entertaining, it did detract from an overall good story.

As I said, I like these types of stories where the main character is able to use logic and emotion to sway the outcome into something other than the marriage ending in cheating. It's a nice diversion from the normal Cheating Wife who either regrets her decisions or enjoys them while making a cuckold of the weak and unsuspecting husband.

One final thought, Carol wasn't as innocent as she was portrayed thru most of this story and it hurt and confused the story a bit. She admitted she would sleep with Rolando in New York if he "sweet-talked" her some more??? Too many holes and dead ends were created with the nude modeling and her admitting to being sexually aroused from time to time by Rolando. If he truly had a thin and unimpressive Penis and she had the big sausage at home coupled with the love of and for her husband, she wouldn't have wavered at all.

Being nude for her, as is the same with most nudists, is not a sexual thing and it was never sexualized in this story until that part. People are complicated and will often do the "unexpected" but most people will not change who they essentially are unless a traumatic event occurs. That didn't happen here. She also decides to go against her beliefs and display the naked portrait of herself to the public, not just the general public, but her friends, neighbors, donors, etc. because of a tiff with her husband??? That doesn't make any sense since she was so explicit since early in the story and her college days not allowing any pictures or drawings of her naked to leave her sight and control. Based on these errors, perhaps the author should have had Gabe bury her in the other hole lol.

Keep at it, you will get much better and more consistent, and thus, give us a better story as time goes on. You could easily become a great writer on this site, just don't end up "jumping the shark" or going for the "Literotica shock and awe" mistakes that many of the writers on here have done. Some of the best stories on here are seemingly "boring" but the twists and turns they add are believable and entertaining, their characters are flawed but stay rooted in who they truly are presented as, and we are able to relate to at least one of if not more of the characters in a story since they have redeeming characteristics we can see in ourselves. Some humor doesn't hurt either.

At least Rol is 6 feet closer to hell

Docent......

Loved the story thought it was great felt for the husband an thought he was too good for his wife she said she may sleep with him in ny if not for her husband she would of cheated I don’t know if she can be trusted in future I’m not saying she should be buried like Rolando but surely her husband deserves some respect an she should show remorse for what she almost did. As a woman I still see her acting inappropriately being naked just the 2 of them is bad enough imo

Loved the story. Gabe was a great guy, and had a great plan for the results. Thanks for the story.

Gabe was too lenient on the bitch Carol.....should have made her suffer a little more

1 or 2 stars?!! After burying him and leaving him 2 stars. With the description of painting in beginning no way to give more unless he used second grave.

I have quite a few friends' wives and other women I know who complained about women who are treated like shit after public displays of too much?!!

Their speeches were very coarse usually; milder being only whores and sluts advertise. Put it on the menu don't complain when someone treats you accordingly. I know some that in appropriate locations show, but only if appropriate

Gabe did a great job of getting the facts before acting. The gala scene was outstanding.

Still, it bothered me that he never took Carol to task, for the public showing. He rolled with it, but he deserved better than having his wife put him in a position to be humiliated. Then she took the wrong side after the little shit tried to assault her husband.

The Gabe you built through backstory, wouldn’t allow her behavior, without saying his piece.

Ok. I loved the story, gave it a 5. My only issue is concerning the kidnapping and burying of “ the spaniel”. The police would have done an investigation, and probably uncovered the grave. And let’s just say that they were so backwards, they didn’t. His original plan to let him go after two days, would have caused spaniel to run to the police, and hubby would be going to jail for kidnapping, unlawful imprisonment, as well as some more. I think he should have just killed him to begin with. ,

not as good as some, but better than most. CINCO!

Good for game. Too bad tho, she knows where the body is buried and if he ever crosses him or threatens him there will be a big decision to make.

She should have occupied the other hole, she is a slut wannabe... She would have let that asshole put his little sick in that huge hole below her bell-button. Put her in the other hole and then you can fin somebody decent, that wants the quiet life, not a public display...