Gray Lake Wolves Pt. 03

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He bites me back. His teeth sinking into my flesh is the best kind of pain and sets off another round of spasms. I feel his dick twitch inside and the he squirts hot cum along the walls of my pussy. I keep milking him, coming down from that second orgasm.

He finally stills and pulls out, giving me that perfect panty dropping smile. He falls back on his back. Through our bond, which was just strengthened by the blood we just exchanged, I feel his content and adoration. He pulls me to his side and kisses my head. "Thank you. That means everything. You mean everything." He says with a yawn and we fall asleep, just like that. No cleaning up. No showers. His cum still leaking out and dripping down my leg. What can I say? We are animals.

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EroticAarielEroticAarielover 2 years ago

Lmao… I’m sorry but some of these comments are ridiculous. Wow! I wonder what they are like walking around in society if they can’t handle a story not going their way 🤦🏼‍♀️

Keep on writing, I’m enjoying the chapters 👍🏻👍🏻

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
He said he would protect her

He is doing a piss poor job of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love

After reading the negative comments I thought you should tell you how much I love this story. It's simple and hot and doesn't make Clara seem perfect she has insecurities as we all do. And she trusts him, as she should, and loves him plus they're animals so yeah they has hot sex. Keep writing please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Started out as a bad read

Really wasn't anything but preteen fluff and unreal story line. Hey that's what the comment section is for, opinions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Those of you who don't like the story the answer is simple "don't "read it.

Go forth and write the perfect story and then you can read each others.

Ha You know you can't

CYNNARACYNNARAover 9 years ago
THERE IS SO MUCH WRONG WITH THIS STORY LINE..........

Have to agree that this story seems to be written by a virginal starry eyed teen.

No self respecting woman is going to allow her husband to disappear on their wedding night and act as if nothing is wrong.

This story should be posted on wattpad not here on literotica.

Or maybe posted as a submissive story.

The lead female character is a timid virgin and supposed to lead a group of people with an assholish lead male still acting like a 16 year old horny high schooler.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It's so bad, it's good (this story is a joke, right)

I'm convinced a 16 year old girl, who writes werewolf stories on wattpad, wrote this story. I've read some fucking awesome werewolf stories on this site and this is not one of them. I think I only found out the protagonist's name in this chapter. How does the author think that there has been character development if she hasn't even been very descriptive about their mannerisms, their appearances, or their personalities? This just reads like any other paranormal story on wattpad written by bored teenage girls who all claim to be passionate about literature, meanwhile, they've only read the Hunger Games trilogy and binge watch teen wolf and the vampire diaries.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
NOT GOOD-BAD-WORSE

Those are the titles of the first three chapters. I agree with the majority of the comments, except the favorable comments.

No backbone in the Alpha female? No pack classes;i.e. Alpha, Beta, Theta, Omega? If Grayson's original pack did not interact with humans, where did all the modern "human" conveniences come from? What does the pack do to make a living?

I will stop there. I really hope you can save this story. It is going downhill fast.

willieonewillieoneover 9 years ago

Your wrote..

He chuckles, "I saw the bay window from the outside and thought about my beautiful girl sleeping in the bed I want to fuck her in. It was a treat to turn the corner and find you looking all sweet and sexy with your adorable little sleepy voice."

My question is..if that was the case WHY did he leave her standing there and go of with the bitches to the lake and then sit at the fire side with them and not stay with his MATE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Story!!!

I dont care what anyone else says. I think this story is great! It has all the things I love about a good werewolf story. I hope there will be more. I will definitely check back. This would make a great novel and even series with the other characters. Good job on this!

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