All Comments on 'Great Afternoon at the Pool'

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chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Nice Read***

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice

Part 2. She tells her friend and the friends slip over one at the time. Then they all find about each other and they all get together for a pool party and a night of fun.

isadoreisadoreabout 4 years ago

would like to see more of this trope. Well crafted tale with some nice descriptors and a, hopefully, fun ending.

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