All Comments on 'Greenfield Farm'

a really interesting and aroiusing story. I didn't know what to expect and it caught me a bit off guard but I enjoyed it. I was quite aroused and remained so from start to finish. The detailed images conveyed the scenes very well. Thanks for leading me on this journey... sitting here semi hard, I wish I was a bull on the farm.

Editing note, there's about a page and a half of repeated copy from the beginning that should be deleted.

Thanks for the adventure

Great story. In page 2 your story reverted back to the beginning and started over. Not sure if some was left out.

Rapier sharp!

I republished the story. Hopefully that will fix the end being cut off.

Great story! (and I know you're working on fixing the content and formatting).

Great work!

Well look here, I have a brand new fetish.

Or. A couple of them.

Very imaginative!

So far so good. I've only had time to read the first third but I'll definitely be coming back to finish later. I love fresh new and erotic ideas, and you've certainly captured some of those here.

Very weird!!

Not sure how this activity helped the training for these elite and privileged athletes, but hey ho, it’s a fantasy :-)

It was weirdly fun and interesting at first, but the two “trainers” knocking up the entire team and coaches was too much.

It would be interesting if the cows were given new homes or sold to new owners. Just a thought.

I really loved the story! I hope there will be a sequel! :-)

Wow, this is horrifying! Wonderful dystopian horror story