by Geoff Chaucer
Really good, all of it was brilliant. I love that zipless sex thing. The only thing i didnt like was the peeing bit and what he said, it didnt seem quite as erotic as the rest but thats just my particular taste.
Well done, thoughraly enjoyed it.
Well written and very exciting. The idea of 'the zipless fuck' has been a fantasy of mine ever since I read 'Fear of flying' over thirty years ago. The peeing was an added frisson and has been a passion of mine for even longer. I hope you include it in your next story(ies)
Cherpee