by Geoff Chaucer
Well written and very exciting. The idea of 'the zipless fuck' has been a fantasy of mine ever since I read 'Fear of flying' over thirty years ago. The peeing was an added frisson and has been a passion of mine for even longer. I hope you include it in your next story(ies)
Cherpee
Really good, all of it was brilliant. I love that zipless sex thing. The only thing i didnt like was the peeing bit and what he said, it didnt seem quite as erotic as the rest but thats just my particular taste.
Well done, thoughraly enjoyed it.