All Comments on 'Grief, Lust, and Consequences Ch. 01'

Can't wait to hear more

Wow, what a ride, wonderfully paced story, overwhelming with emotion and an awesome plot, Especially the slow burn...

Waiting excitedly for part 2

I am so invested in this story! Really looking forward to reading the next chapter! Excellent writing....

I definitely hope you continue this story, loved it.

I like your story! I would welcome more of your writing and interested to see what you could do to capture more of the deep love maturation that is possible if you open up your own frailties. Your mind has realized great potential with this story but you are holding back in releasing it to the emotional senses of your readers. All kinds of potential here, I would like to encourage you to expose it all in your story. Best wishes! JLL

Dang. Quite good. Usually i just wank then leave, but i left this open in a background tab to read the rest of the chapter later. Only proper good novels get the background tab treatment.

I loved the story, Hopefully there will be a chapter 2

Please! Ch2!

I'm very curious what your connection is to the names that run through your stories. Is it just for simplicity's sake, not having to put unnecessary work into that aspect of your stories, or is there a more personal reason for them? Inquiring minds want to know! Anyway, enjoyed the story, keep up the good work!

Fan-DAMN-tastic job! Absolutely a five star rating for sure. 👍

If you have ever read some of the scathing reviews that I have left on other author's efforts, then you would know that I don't give out five star ratings very often. 😉 I would give you an even better score if I were able to do so. I'm not certain if I have read anything else that has been created by your hands, but I will certainly explore your other works in hopes of finding more high quality entertainment just like this one.

My own twiddles are not even close to being in the same class as this story. I only 'follow' a handful of authors, but you have certainly made the list.

Please do continue writing Jeff and Katy's story. 🙏 If you should decide against it, then I'll be forced to make up my own ending where Jeff kicks Bethany to the curb and divorces her, Katy sells the family homestead, and Jeff moves himself and Katy to another city where they are totally unknown, pretending to be married, and raise a family 👪 with 4 kids happily ever after. 5/5

Very good. Telling us that they had more sex is what we call "a missed opportunity" to express how they feel about each other and how they appreciate each other physically. More eroticism

Plot and emotions are both excellent, and the sex included works well also

Five for you

Very, very good. I absolutely enjoy your style. The feel of Jeff, Katy, and Bethany so real, so true. A great story. I would love to see a follow up chapter 2. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Loved this! I cant wait to see what happens next :)

I would like more explicit details of their sexual escapades, but what was written was good enough for 5 stars. Well thought out & just well done. Very few distractions from grammar and spelling. Enjoyable!

Bill S.

A really great story. There is just one thing, that bothers me extremely. The first time in the cabin was nearly a rape. His trying to get into her panties with just an „I need you“ is nothing, a brother should do or anyone should do. There is a good chance that she didn’t want that and then he really fucked up. That was a very thin ice

Very well written. I really loved it and I hope you continue it please. Thank you for posting this story.

Started off good, but wasn't a fan of Katy's outlet being sex with random guys. Basically paints her as a slut that needs to fuck to cope with grief. Could have done without that to be honest. Surely there was a better alternative. Other than Bethany being a grade-A frigid bitch, that was my major gripe with this story (oh and Jeff's hesitancy to commit as fully as Katy, but I can understand it at least).

Bethany comes across as a horrible, selfish bitch, but I suppose that was the intent with her character. Lets the husband eat her out but then doesn't let him finish. Yeah, marriage is dead in the water. Wouldn't surprise me if she's cheating. Seems like the personality type to do that, you know, selfish all-about-me. What the hell did he see in her to marry her I wonder?

When Katy confessed near the end, it was so touching. But Jeff was being a tool bag. Commit to her and risk it all for fuck sake you coward! She is willing so you should be, too. I really wanted to slap him so damn hard. They suffered needlessly for almost 2 months in misery because of that. I mean it could be a lot worse I suppose.