All Comments on 'Grif's First Ruin'

Really........there should be a category called sex fiction. This would go there, otherwise it's BDSM or at the least fetish! No wait.......I forgot....this shit will

go in the mentally ill category!

I want to wring Kat's neck, slowly. She's got a great man and is slowly killing him. She's a disgrace to woman-kind and has no respect for her man.I find this so sad and a great loss Why would a guy want to live this way?.

and not about respect, fulfillment, pleasure or certainly not love...it is ugly.

It won't bother me if you never post here again.

At least be smart enough to post this garbage in FETISH. You have a cock cage in your story, you're squarely in fetish. Then at least TRY to understand what you're writing about. The cage is a toy that he can remove at any time without the key. A pair of common household pliers works just fine. But who cares since he can masturbate and ejaculate while wearing the cage. Don't think so? GOOGLE it. So this entire story is a joke. Go away. Stay away.

1 star only because negative stars aren't yet available.

Another man hating, feminist leaning, cuck story . A new one, ruined orgasms. Messed up peoole.

I really wish there was a no star button. 1 is insufficient.

Grif's got a real treasure there. For gods sake, dump the entitled controlling nutter wife and dump the cage. Move on

Wrong category.

Too many inflexible trolls in LW.

I think this story is in good category, because it has ruined orgasm content.

And is a very good one also, so I'm waiting for the next chapter...:)

If you had even written token passages Making him more respectable and her Loving towards him this would have been likable instead of distasteful.

Thanks for trying and sharing.

I've never understood why some people think its their duty to downvote well written stories simply because they don't happen to be turned on by a particular kink, idea, or practice. Literotica has a huge and varied selection of stories. Inevitably, some will work for you, and some won't. How about accepting that, recognizing it as a good thing, and stop browbeating those with different interests?

BTW, its pretty obvious that "Grif" loves and craves this treatment, and that his (loving) wife is giving him what he desperately wants. He may simultaneously be thinking "Oh no" AND "oh yes" but thats the nature of this game. That it seems to excite her too, so its not just a roleplay, doubtless makes it even more powerful for Grif.

Well done!

Might be fun on an occasion, men that live with female cruelty sexually, regularly, must be girls with balls.