All Comments on 'Grocery Delivery'

It was definitely weird, semi erotic until it got to the lame arsed “breeder” bullshit. For personal reasons I ALWAYS check genre and story tags, tbh if you had included the breeder/ pregnancy aspect I would have skipped the story and you wouldn’t have the 1 star rating- surely that’s a win : win?

I’m not entirely sure how or when she’s supposed to have been hypnotised. Isn’t the theory that when hypnotised you won’t do something that you wouldn’t normally do anyway? If that’s the case why would she let them fuck her?

After all she obviously wasn’t attracted to “Mike, a fat, bald, middle-aged man wearing a tank top stained with food drippings and some pretty dingy tighty-whiteys.”

Tess (UK)