All Comments on 'Grounds For Divorce Ch. 01'

I have to purge my memory of this.

How fucking sick can you get.

And wimp ass castrated cuckold husband

She will continue to attempt to fuck Canada to death.

RUBBISH!

faggy and a serious cuckold. I loved every fucking word! MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!! HURRY!!!!

People who write this kind of garbage (and, it is garbage) need to realize that they are revealing to the world what they, themselves, are really like. For example, this author is one very sick person mentally and emotionally and should get profession help.

but his actions show otherwise. Well, that plus his swearing. This story sucked major ass. Thanks for wasting my time.

Put a notice at the beginning that tells people the story includes sex between males. Its rude to put this in loving wives without letting people know, just like I wouldn't put incest in loving wives without a notice. Some people are just not into that.

written by a teenager boring trite dull

This belongs in cocksucking faggots not loving wives. There are sections for this bullshit, just not this one. Teh scariest part is the "ch01"... meaning you plan to continue this abhorant garbage.

. . . from almost virginal deacon berating his wife as slut to bisexual menage a trois in one easy lesson. Okay, it is a bit far fetched to go that far that fast with virtually no mental trauma but the trauma fully developed would take a couple of additional pages. We would still be reading. I'll hang around for the next chapter and see how it goes. I am sure many will have difficulty with the content and subject matter (I don't) but you have handled things well so far. Good start to a story.

and kids, this story has a different slant on relationships. TK U MLJ LV NV

Sorry but way too religious. Faith is one thing Bible thumping religion quite another. I just can't bring myself to read about these religious beliefs where one one hand everyting is Holy and at the same time thism religion's priests are sexually molesting boys. Sorry just my personal feelings. Maybe next story....

Not loving wives. Maybe gay??

The tags say it all. CHEATING-GAY MALE-HOMOSEXUAL-VOYEUR. I guess these apply to this writer.

..and entertaining.

and you be a vegetable, what makes that the poor kids ? brainless really. could not see one adult in your shit story

not good to hide this in LW

at anonymous comments...

YOUR INTENTIONS FOR THIS STORY, WITH THE 1ST CHAPTER YOU HAVE ALMOST SUCCEEDED. NOW WITH FORTHCOMING CHAPTERS, READERS WILL SEE IF YOUR GOALS HAVE BEEN MET. NOW FOR A LIGHTER NOTE. RE: YOUR BIO: YOU CAN NOT BE "BI" AND BE IN HEAVEN. THOSE THERE ARE ASEXUAL, NON-SEXUAL OR UNI-SEXUAL. WITH ALL THE UNKNOWNS AND MYTHS SURROUNDING THEM IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO BE ANYTHING OR EVERYTHING, BUT AGAIN WHATEVER CAN BE WILL BE AND THAT INCLUDES THIS. RESPECTFULLY TK U MLJ LV NV

Until newer revenge or believable reconcilation stories here

a romantic revenge story from SOL: Do not paste you must type from characters to characters.

http://storiesonline.net/story/60574:0;0

A cruel and romantic revenge story from SOL.

http://storiesonline.net/sex-story/62243

But way too gay.

To quote another commenter,,,, way to far in the wrong catagory, definately NOT LW!!!!!!

Just Plain Fucked up.

But the stupidity of christianity towards sex is spot on,that somehow sex between hubby and wife is dirty if it isn't about making babies and that lusting and loving one's mate is a sin.....course from the rc this comes from 80 year old perverted men and from evangelicals freaks who trumpet virtue and do exactly the opposite.

So the religious husband went from being a prude to being angry with his wife for cheating with his best friend to being a bisexual cuckold sucking his friends cock. Yeah right. What universe is this taking place? Ch. 2. We'll see...

Pure perverted garbage!

Just plain filth, not even a story.

"What kind of man doesn't want a blowjob?" Back to Tom. "You won't cuddle, you won't fuck in any position other than missionary with the God-damned lights out! You won't suck my tits or eat my pussy"

which of these 3 are the social climbers. TK U MLJ LV NV

How did 2 guys that were supposedly religious turn into male sluts quite so quickly? An interesting, if unbelievable, story.

its only skin deep and lies entirely in the eyes of the beholder.

shes a slut, the husbands a moron and the retard that wrote this is an idiot.

By the way, you also need to go get your religious demons dealt with.

'nuff said

That is all

As far as my personal life goes, my children are well adjusted and free to form their own opinions about their sexuality. They're handling that just fine.

Y'all understand, writing a story is an exercise. An attempt to channel the thoughts and motivations of the participants in ways that we, personally, may not be experienced at, or comfortable with. Some of the activities may be something we wouldn't be entirely comfortable doing ourselves. And some we would, hehehe.

Yeah, about teh ghey stuff. Sorry about not leaving a warning up front.

As far as the religious ummm, conversion. I do know a guy who, in the quiet of his own home, does things that he publicly rails against. The thing is, he went from puritan to near deranged in the span of about eighteen hours.

FUCKING TRASH

but if you read the username of the writer it shouldn't come as a surprise to the reader.

One Star as "Loving Wives". Five Stars as "Fetish". Only One Star if you'd put it in "Gay Male" as it was too heterosexual.

And another overzealous sanctimonious asshole bites the dust. Now I'm not up for

sharing my woman, but the way Evan got Tom to come out of his pious little shell was pretty good stuff. 4 stars for this one, can't wait to see what happens in chapter 2.

For sure Tom needs to get his head out of his ass. Not everybody is a "great" lover and that takes communication. What we have here is a failure to communicate. No matter how you look at it she cheated. In spite of a hot night and Tom's learning curve, she cheated multiple times with multiple men over the years. She cheated instead of getting out of her "comfort" zone. Tom might be a self righteous ass hole but it was her who failed, not him. He was ignorant..dumb in fact but none the less sincere. She broke the vows 5 other times while he was steadfast. Religion Sucks! And so does what it does to people. He might be a fool but there is no excuse for her. Time to cut her loose...she's a cheat and a liar. Enforce the grounds for divorce. Despite however Tom got enlightened from the event the fact remains she lied and cheat from the start. Personally I could never get past the betrayal. Hopefully Tom will, in the end, see that clearly as it is and divorce his cheating lying spouse.

WRONG CATEGORY!

And I quote:

Wrong Category

One Star as "Loving Wives". Five Stars as "Fetish". Only One Star if you'd put it in "Gay Male" as it was too heterosexual.

Where does this crap come from? BTB

Tracy is a slut. She will always be a slut. The husband should divorce her and never look back!

(As in whiskey wth a beer chaser)

I need to wash my eyes out with soap, but how can I erase from my mnd this crap?.

This is worse than bullshit or horseshit! At least they can be used as fertilizer, a low grade fuel, and to make methane gas.

But this is cat shit! Not only is it useless, it poses a an actual theeat to the health of human beings, especially pregnant women.

I have the sane low feeling for your story.

And don't say, "read the story tags first" I CANNOT DO THAT, SINCE THE WEB DESIGNERS STICK THEM AT THE END, AND I CANNOT GET TO THE TAGS WITHOUT SCROLLING DOWN THROUGH 1 PAGE, FOR A 1o PAGE STORY, AND AT LEAST 2 FOR A MULTI PAGE STORY, AND EVEN WHILE SCROLLING DOWN RAPIDLY, VARIOUS WORDS OR PHRASES REGISTER IN MY MIND (sexually salacious and suggestive wods) THAT PIQUE MY INTEREST, AND IF SO INTERESTED, I START TO READ THE STORY. THEN, IF IT'S CATSHIT LIKE THS, I SKIM TO THE END AND RATE IT ONE STAR.

SO PUT THE TAGS ATTHE FRONT, NOT THE END, TO SAVE THE READERS' TIME, AND PROTECT AUTHORS FROM BAD SCORES AND REVIEWS!

One of the most ridiculous and mean spirited stories in LW. My fault for starting to read. Should have noticed the author's name.

You want us to believe this uptight guy, that is married and has two kids, after finding out that his wife is cheating, suddenly turns into a cock crazy, gay wild man? Are you kidding me? That's nuts even in a fictional story. And for Pete's sake. Post this garbage in Gay Male where it belongs.

No stars as even giving this drivel one star would be an insult to the star.

Well a check of your bio data suggested your bisexual bias to any reader so there really are no surprises when it came for you to create male characters who exhibited latent gay tendencies. But as an overal erotic story this one sucked and not in a good way. You tried to cram so many themes into one submission that it became a muddy mess. Loving Wives? More like Gay would have been a much morer appropriate category. I gave it a chance and read it in full, but this one did absolutely nothing for this reader.

Very nice story. It’s about time Tom woke up. Everything she enjoys ought to be part of their sexual repertoire.

You do need an editor / proof reader. Several times you mixed up Tom’s and Evan’s names.

yes,,tracy cheated, so what, get over it,,many of us need FWB,,,,they save many marriages!!

olblueyes,

I'm sure you're right. What's your wife's cell number?

More culturally degenerate bullshit. Just stupid, predictable, and false.

The over-the-top husband killed it for me. Terrible character, unrealistic and embarrassing to the author. Dumb.