All Comments on 'Grower in the Shower'

by Busty_DePraved

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dirtysondirtysonabout 2 months ago

Hot please continue !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapters. Great start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I love your story but for me it's too short to post, would have really liked to read more of it now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Really beautiful start, part 2 soon, please, will they make to aunt`s in time? They have the best reason to be late, falling in love...

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 months ago

FTDS. Don't submit until you have an entire story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I hope Chapter 2 is on the way....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good start. Lengthen the chapters now. They aren't rabbits. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

". to be continued..."

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Barely a chapter, and no chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Should have been titled as Chapter 1, not as a complete story.

JTSFTJTSFTabout 2 months ago

A rather abrupt but pleasing beginning. It would be interesting to learn how Mom planned her seduction and her motivation and justification for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great start! Delicious and I’m not talking about the bacon. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Loved the first part of the story Busty! I can kinda picture whats cumming. The road trip, then Aunty. Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Despite other comments, the length of this offering is perfect. You have established the age of maturity having been met and that a special acknowledgement was to be expected.

The shower was an ideal location and, travel will follow, undoubtedly you have ascertained quite a few " to follows ."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great beginning, looking forward to more chapters rather than a long drawn out story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

It was like you were reading my mind. Can't wait to see what you do next

Busty_DePravedBusty_DePravedabout 2 months agoAuthor

LMAO I am new here .. didn’t know u guys were so rabid about your chapters!! Warning this story is short and sweet lol.. but I will edit the title, okay?!! 😝

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Terrible! Oh, hi mom, yeah sure I will jump in the shower and jill you off, happens everyday.

eroenthusiasteroenthusiast26 days ago

This was great well done.

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Just writing out some of the ideas in my dark & filthy mind. Which stories do YOU want to be real??