by reddirtwriter
Incredible!!! Red ur a force to be reckon with! Keep on writing! I hope Josh is not gonna simply accept Trent... Make da boy work his ass off to get Josh back!!!
You made this particular chapter the most real or one of the most real in the whole series. I understand weather changes rapidly on the plains, Living in the northern plains.
Red, you have really outdone yourself in this chapter. In all of the series that these boys are in (WB, MCC) this one takes the cake. The emotions, the characters and incredible drama - absolutely massive. And I thought to myself: they're in Oklahoma. That damn tornado is not even contrived!! Beautifully done <3
I am all for Josh and Trent getting together, but only after some serious drama. I'm hoping it might even put Mitch and Darrin on different sides. I can see Darrin being more sympathetic to Trent and more willing to let him come back, but Mitch seems to me like he's going to be papa bear and make sure that Josh doesn't get hurt again. Trent needs to jump through a lot of hoops to get back to being trusted again, especially by Josh. By the way Reddirtwriter, you are my favorite author at present on this website, please keep up the great work and any chance Chapter 5 is ready to go ..?
you made me cry, the story is ripping my heart out.....i love your writing and hope you are planning on publishing these stories soon
That was worth the wait, but please don't let Josh die! Trent must go home and get married, pleeease!
Of course I hope for Trent's safe return, but I hope more for Josh's full recovery. What a great scene it will be when Josh awakes and Trent is at his bedside, stroking Josh's hairy chest and "whispering" him back from the edge. That should show Trent he is needed and wanted and loved!
Omg, that was wow, Trent leaving wasnt surprising but the tornado was not expected. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job as always Red. :)
Waited so long for this next chapter,but it was certainly worth the wait.