by Suspicious_Quail
Beautifully written, but somehow, for me, lacking in erotic intensity. Maybe I've just read and enjoyed so many of these incest stories that the receptors in my mind have been worn out.
Nicely written. It kept my interest throughout and I stayed hard too. Looking forward to part 2.
Hopefully all good things will not come to an end.
Waiting... why are we waiting? Waiting for the culmination of the ultimate act!
Warm & cozy. Time to bust it up; an old boyfriend or unplanned medical
condition 😜 Yeah, that…
5 ⭐️, anxiously awaiting part two.
M
Exquisitely written story. Filled with sensitivity and wild passion.
I hope there will be more to come.
Fabulous
It's a good storyline but need more sex or a few chapters more that build into the passing of bro/sis bonding and more. Please add more detail on how it makes you feel in the heat of the momome like I get goosebumps each time he touches and I get instantly wet betemy kegs when he is around him. You can add some sneaking around quickies as he pulls down your shorts he unzip and slide it in etc. I can help you right it. Please reachout to me if need to be. Good luck on the next chapter.