All Comments on 'Growth and Lust Ch. 02 - Tied down'

by jakenotjacob

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WhiteNekoWhiteNekoabout 3 years ago

Dang. This is quite the story, thank you for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Veronica needs her ass beaten.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please more chapters. I know Gin gift is a human's compatible womb, as it's kinda obvious. It might be weird, but her growing a cock instead of using a fake cock to consummate the femdom and reverse roleplay seems more organic, like how Roke grew an arm. There are too many references to Gin's brutality and not enough showing her brutality. Would love to see it, as her current self isn't matching with the references. And the first encounter with Veronica's attempt to get Roke back was very brief, and a little lame with just one guy. Would expect more force considering how vicious Veronica is. Other than that, loved how you told the story, and how Roke's past haunts him. Please continue.

redder882redder882over 2 years ago

can't wait for the next part :)

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