All Comments on 'Growth Spurt Pt. 12'

Really enjoyed reading this series. One of the most enjoyable new ones I’ve read in awhile.

Loved this series, it was entertaining and so sexually charged. Great job!

Absolutely enjoyed this story. Excellent plot and character development. Each chapter was just the right duration. Keep writing.fz

It was a wounderful story even with the sad fate of Delia. So 5 stars.

Great imagination. Realistic to fantasy and back again. Wonderful!!!!!

An amazing ending! I love this story and that you took it as far as you did where you never knew where the end would lead. Love, sadness and more love in this ending chapter, with all of the love in this story, losing one is tough, but there was much joy that followed. I thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us! :)

I am so sorry it had to end😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 definitely was a awesome ertico story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😈😈thank you😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Love the story line and throughly enjoyed your writing.

One of the best I’ve read on this site.

The sadness ruined it for me. Sorry buddy, I really enjoyed the whole rest of the series. I believe erotica deserve a happy ending, but I guess that’s just me. Keep Writing!

Damn near shed a tear when reading about Delia. The story was incredible.

What a wild and wonderful tale. Well done 5 stars

what an incredible series, well thought out, with lots of ups and downs. One of the better stories on here. Thank you

It was a really great story not quite the ending i like but it is how life goes sometimes.

Beautiful story plus good story deserves a 5 star ✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟✨🌟

After Part 1, I decided to reserve any comments until the conclusion... A purely amazing story! The sex scenes made me cum over and over again, while the storyline made me think, laugh, and cry... especially with the death of Delia!! This is definitely one of the best stories on this site!!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Loved the story! The best I've read yet! Suspense anguish, love, character development, you're a great story teller.

Loved the story. Had to use tissues on my eyes from the accident on. I'd give you a rating of 20 if. I could.

Hated Delia's death but that is part of life. Great story

great story,when is the next drug trial? put me on the list,LOL

Very well done, I enjoyed it very much

VERY good story. Very well written. Once I started reading it I HAD to finish it. Again absolutely awesome story

I don’t comment often but this entire series had me hooked from start to finish. I genuinely felt a sense of loss when Delia died and I think the way it was written made everything work so well. Please keep up the good work.

Is this a real story or a fiction one ? Because authors note in the last part is confusing me.

I slowly lost interest over time. More many kinks and powers does not make an erotic story better. It didn't really make sense why he didn't pull in Terri, since she somewhat submissive. Moreover, with respect to the epilogue, wny was Alyssa the only one to have his children?

Great story, read the whole thing in one sitting. Broke my heart twice, Delia's passing and Mia's leaving. Glad he didn't become Superman, just special. That's good enough. 5 stars throughout.

Sorry to disagree with the general consensus but although I liked the story until Alyssa's introduction, I ended hating it after that.

Supposedly the MC loved and was in love with the women in the group and also supposedly their relationship was forever but then Alyssa appears and then the story gets broken IMHO. It seems as if she loved only truly Alyssa and is willing to let escape the others. Wasn't he so in love with them? What does 'forever' mean for this author? He said he wanted a total commitment and it ended meaning absolutely nothing. I hate when relationships and bonds that seem that are gonna last, end gratuitously as if they weren't as true as we were made to believe.

I also hated the drama, especially Delia's death. I hate drama in fiction. Real Life has already enough drama to look for more in fiction.

If I had known all of that, I wouldn't have read it.

So, until Alyssa, 5 stars. After, ZERO. So, I'm not gonna read more stories by this author.

I was hooked by the time I read chapter 2. As far as the ending goes, it shows that real life moves on no matter how much we want to remain in a fairytale. As far as the separation of the family, it was foreshadowed about half way through. James was young and just starting to become an adult.

Love the story, I think it is great. AAAAAA++++++

I really liked the series but hated that delia was killed and keegan was left basically emotionally scared for life it ruined a good story

Story was great till he fell in love mom moved on Mia left and Susie left. I want to read a story to forget about the world life. I want story makes me happy and horney. And it started great even middle was good last. I actually got pissed off and reason I'm writing this.

To be honest the whole story was good till this last chapter. Delia shouldn't have been killed and Mia shouldn't have left.

Enjoyed each and every chap, well done.

I was ok with girls going there own way but to killing Delia that crossed the line and killed total story and another thing mc creampied girls almost every day why the everyone not get pregnant the story should ended with everyone getting pregnant and he should have fucked his mom's girlfriend

YES...this was a totally enjoyable story...even with 'dad' being a douché, and the passing of Delia/Mia's falling in love...

THOS WAS A FANTASY, Y'ALL-as such, accept it or reject it, and walk away-no need for further commenting, one-way-or-the-other...the story is over, and the ending is written.

I, for one, appreciate the 'reality' thrown into the FANTASY story...lends some semblance of 'life's to it...WELL DONE, TIBERIUS PRIME!!

I hated this final that ruined completely the story for me. It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle than an author of erotic fiction ends a harem story happily without breaking the group. This author unfortunately follows the tradition.

Seriously. a tragic sex story.

I've been reading on this site for close to 15 years. I usually don't do multiple chapters stories but this one...Wow. This was a treat. Great writing, kept me on the edge of my seat.

Great story nice ending although really sad news about Delia

Hilarious !

Veritable Feast?

You have (always) wanted to say that?

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But you still haven’t!!

Generally speaking a hot sexy story. However all great artists/performers know when its tkme to bow out and leave the audience wanting more.imo that point was maybe 3 chapters ago. Also certain side stories distracted more than added.the douche bag dad and unnecessary death.without these elments the story was 6 (not 5) stars. As is id give it 3 maybe 4 stars overall.

The random car crash and killing Delia seemed very unnecessary. Like really, drunk driver angle? So cliché. Why did we need this random drama injected? I don't see the point. There was already a bit of sad undertone with a lot of the harem kind of going their own way. A death was not necessary, especially his first. That's cruel :(

What happened to the sister?

I for one would have loved to see Dani stay with him as she promised, but overall a very satisfying story.