All Comments on 'Guest House Ch. 04: Night Cap'

The story was great and would have been better if you had not kept mixing up the ladies names, made it a little confusing. Consider having someone else edit it next time or re-read it yourself before submitting.

Otherwise great effort

The mixed up names made me give up .

The funniest thing in the story was his neighbor telling him he could use his " LAUNDRY MAT" too fuckin funny . Never trust spell cheque .

BTW for future reference it's LAUNDROMAT .

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I can't believe there aren't more positive comments. All of your stories are AWESOME. Eagerly awaiting the next one!

Well thought out situations and interactions. As noted, only slight problem is the mix up of the names of Carla and Cindy. In my opinion, I would describe Carla's body again as she becomes a lover later on, but only her outfit is detailed.

Well apart from him not coming in that last part, you have kept it going as a one handed read

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