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charlesgaskins31548charlesgaskins31548over 19 years ago
a role playing idea

man when i started reading this in first party, i was like this will suk . but man the more i read the more i want to become a cabby!! me an the ol-lady are going to use this in our / soon to be raped role- playing; / preciate theplot for a beutiful night i gotta go time to be a bad boy

doiknowyoudoiknowyouabout 19 years ago
I agree

I, too, thought that I wouldn't like this story at first... but I'm glad that I read it anyway! I saw that it was labeled "hot", so I decided to give it a chance. Well done! Just what I needed this morning! I was sitting here all hot and bothered, looking for something to help me "take the edge off", and this story definitely did the trick! Multiple times! LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I 3

I thought it was going to b a bad story too...njoyed it in the end..more please

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