All Comments on 'Guns and Dust Ch. 05'

Good writing; the setting,the characters, dialogues... and the sex scenes. Everything is captivating. Can't wait to read the following chapters! Keep up the good work!

Looking forward to the next exciting episode.

Excellent! Much more detailed, and better than mad max! Loving it. Five stars once again, and can't wait for more.

Excellent work, great SciFi ambiance, wonderful characters, a plot well done, action and romance ..

So far this story has all the ingredients, please continue

Thank you for your efforts.

started this last night and HAD to finish them all!! 5 stars!

****A lot of action good read. Thanks for sharing.

Fan of New Vegas? My two cents would be that you are selling your waste lander female lead too short. I would think an adult age female in that environment would be quite a bit more hardened to suffering than portrayed. In fact, I think your male protagonist would have to explain his mercy based on what happened to those she was with. The adrenaline rush nausea I get. Anyway, good story otherwise.