Loved the soft, tender story with some of your poetry shining through - could there be more of that - in some moments, the most distracting ones, it took a lot concentration to follow the details.
Thank you for taking a bit of your time if you have read something from what I have submitted here so far. I am poet mostly and still getting a feel for writing longer pieces. Things about me: Just someone trying to make my way in our tumultuous world. Most of my writings wil...