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All Comments on 'Gwennalyn's Sexual Awakening Ch. 17'

by majicman21

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FerrumitzalFerrumitzalover 3 years ago

Meh. I was curious where this story was going, but after 17 chapters, it apparently isn't going very far. Still with the weird village and screwing everything in sight? No development of the main character, no advancing of the story, no real idea except to create yet another sex scene.

Solid writing in the technical sense, but not really a story so much as it is a chain of sex scenes.

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