by LitRiter
Yes, Continue the story.. I would like to see more of your work.
Honoured to be the first to comment. Needs several chapters to develope a romance between Green eyes and our girl. To meet and appologise for the display(hint hint). And in ideal world turn out to be the man of her dreams, after of course a lot of personal issues get solved as is common in your tales. Just personaly the lesbian aspect, I love reading that kind of story. Often has so much feeling in them, but dont know about Ronnie or the Asian-American as potenial partners. But its your story.