All Comments on 'Gwen's Release'

The fantastic detail of this moving tale immerses you in Gwens' world. Your left longing to be a part of the story and aching for more. A superb effort, more of the same please Reflection.

This is really good for a first story, Reflection. Congratulations and good luck to you. :)

mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

I get hard everytime I read this story!!! It seems as though you have written other stories. Please share them with us. I feel as though I am there. I have been anxiously awaiting for another story from you!!! Please share more of your experiences or storytelling!!!!!

Do you happen to have anymore of the stories like that. It really hit me at home.

Great 1st story!!!!! Please share more with us!!!!

Felt a soft touching ache at the end of your story, as if there was abit more to say? Nekoca@lycos.com