All Comments on 'Hacked, Locked and Enslaved Pt. 03 - Ending'

Absolutely you need to keep this story going!

Thank you for coming back qnd posting an ending for this series. Nothing I hate more than an opened ended story that isnt finished. That said, I cant help but be disappointed. After 2 chapters building up the Val-Jen dynamic, losing Jen feels like a slap to the face. It honestly feels less like a final chapter, and more like the start of a completely new story. It just doesnt feel the same.

would love to read a second part.

The story has big potential... keep it up and don't let it end here

goog luck with the laptop

I was thinking of dividing it in two set of stories, one with what happened to Val and the other to what happened to Jen. Let me know if that is what you guys want

It's not 10/10 but you should definitely keep writing.

This doesn’t feel like book one, chapter three - you’ve started book two before properly exploring all of the ideas introduced in the first instalment. That said I await your next story in this universe with interest.