All Comments on 'Hacker'

Too predictable!

good but a little rushed. I understand his revenge against her brother, but what did the father do? Or was his embezzlement real?

It's curious the wife never caught on it was her Ex causing all the mischief?

Nice payback story. 5⭐️

How late are KFC's open where you are?

10 Big Blazing Stars for a fun and interesting read. Great Writing and Good Effort. Thanks Buster2U

Seems like a REAL MAN would have just moved on. All this clandestine hacking is wasting HIS time. Couldn't he hack his way into a dating site?

Not really a story, just an outline of one.

Revenge was a little much, otherwise story was put together well. Thanks for your writing.

It lacked enough depth for me to give it a full score, but laughed my ass off the back half of the story. While you never reveal it, it appears his wife had no idea of his dark web activities. 3.7*

Well. Wife was a cheating bitch. That's a given. Hubby, on the other hand, is a vicious, sadistic asshole.

Yeah the last person you want to piss off is a really good hacker.

So if u r not an IT expert..u do get raped in a divorce right?….Right?

Mmmm. Going after her for cheating? OK with that. Going after her brother for beating the MC up for divorcing his sister? OK with that too. Going after the father for being a father? Not good juju. It is implied that the MC hacked his ex-wife and brother because they personally did MC harm. But the father is another question. Nothing was mentioned about him personally being mean spirited towards the MC but it can be implied that MC hacked him and falsified data triggering his arrest, unfair conviction, and false imprisonment. For this, Karma needs to pay MC a visit. If the father really did embezzle funds it should have been explained more clearly. 2

I'm cool with all the revenge but the dad. What did he do to the MC?

The question is, who was responsible for her bad luck after the divorce? Also did the husband hide his money that well that she and her lawyer couldn't find it? Its suspicious that he was able to but beach property. There needs to be more explanation given.

Damn! That's payback to the nth degree.

I hope he didnt mess with the father.

It would have been better instead of rushing through the story. You could have spent sometime setting up how the MC created the scenarios that the ex experienced. More character interaction between different parties.

Going to far is not my idea of revenge..3 *

Interesting plot, but came across as too dry. Seemed like your writing a technical manual, not a d fictional story for entertainment.

Wow, that was some serious burn! Never happen in reality but a fun read here!

Revenge is best served cold as well as your like for KFC

This story was as useless as the other one you published today.

Nice story with 3 exceptions: I didn't like her father being caught from what he did with the embezzlement... unless he really did it.

The story's too short & a lot (starting with the brother beating him up) just glanced over.

No back story, just this's what happened. Discussions are very few.

Otherwise, I enjoyed the story. But in view of the above, only 3 stars. Bob

Hackers are the reason why I never use the internet.

I must say @revivingservent is a very good writer BUT his MCs are awful human beings this one story is a bit better than Thief 01 so I score this story a point higher.

OK…so he used his skills to get revenge.

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But what good is it if the victims didn’t know it?

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Or more precisely….that readers of this tale didn’t get to enjoy it?

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3 ***

greattttt

What a fucking asshole. The divorce was enough. Get off of it little man

The MC was as bad as his cheating wife.

1 star - WRONG CATEGORY - should be in non-erotic, or some other insignificant category.

It is just one more IT guy doing what they do best.

It was a great short story, but the actions seemed a bit much. Found myself cringing as the author went through the results of his hacking. The last line was priceless.

You use the tools you have. Bullies use their muscles. People with brains make a plan and execute it!

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Well done, 5 stars. For those who don’t like the revenge on the slut’s family, they shouldn’t have supported her betrayal!

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ZK

Dr beulahthemick; Usual BTB crap, sad little man get's revenge, then she figures out who did this to her dad and brother, hopefully then it's followed by a Molatov cocktale.

A little more realism would have been nice, but unfortunately it's just a stupid fantasy on the part of the author.

Too predictable, and revenge way over the top, 'kiddie porn' really, move on,

getting away with out being raped in divorce.......outstanding

fucking over ex-wife's affair partner.........................wonderful

fucking up ex-wife's credit and destroying her......excellent

fucking over the whole family for being dumb asses....priceless

for everything live that btb life style.....................5 STARS **************

I can understand the brother, but why didn't he just show that she was cheating and move on? The father didn't do anything to him, so he basically attacked an innocent man and had him sentenced for something he had no control over. That's a bit an L there for me as he is attacking the wrong people, of course, her brother doesn't know the full story, so yeah, he would get mad. It feels like the neanderthal was the MC.

Bigfundrew, depends, like your undergarments. Interstate exit is 3 miles from home, open all nite.

Strong and direct tale by this crafty author.

Simply amazed that readers on this site know not the difference between a story and an outline. Not a good way to make a smarmy remark when one is uneducated.

Cool idea, but this was more like a summary of a story. Show, don't tell.

It was a good concept, but a hard one to pull off. I can understand it being too technical to include the reader in the actual process, but it ended up sounding like a book report about the results and was kind of flat.

Proof? Good circumstantial evidence meets the lower evidentiary threshold in divorce action. You people need to Google "legal discovery in divorce." That's where each side gets to interview, depose, and subpoena records. Start with cell records: texts, phone calls, and attachments between those three create a reason to depose her boss. Also, when the boss and a direct report are screwing, it never, ever, ever stays under the radar, especially if there are other women in the office. My practice sends in a sort of plain Jane P.I. to where these women eat lunch or, better yet, hoist a few. After chumming the water, which often includes buying food and/or drinks, she fishes out the pond. That scene always finds its way back to the cheaters who always turn on each other. Ninety-percent of the time, she goes to HR and screams harassment. Proof, my ass. Human nature always has the last laugh, and the cheaters become the best source to prove my client's case.

I think this writer has prioritized volume over substance. I'm getting to the point where I can't read his tales. Try one or two GOOD stories a month versus two or three a day, which are thrown together like Soviet dress shoes.

All that rather weak build up just so the author can drop a stupid attempt at a burn line. And trust me, it was dumb. Reminds me of something George pulled on an episode of Seinfeld.

3, average at best. Just not really much of a story here. Barely more then a flash story with not much more substance. There was little emotion, the revenge was dry, revenge against people who were added in pretty late in the story with the brother in particular being a target for a beating his gave we found out only during the revenge, and the ending was pretty abrupt. There are some interesting concepts here, the hacker who managed to destroy his wife's attempts to pull one over on him before destroying her, but needs some meat on this bare bones of a story.

Brutal, electronic revenge. I loved it. 6 stars, because the Bear is a hands-on kind of guy. And not necessarily on the keyboard. More please.

The BEAR

Kinda an outline of a story. D

She cheated, I left, I hid all my assets and then I rained anonymous retribution on her and hers. Yawn.

Wham bam, thank you ma'am!

5

Too little, too late...... Not a whole story, more of an outline.

Was there anything more than an idea?

When are women going to learn not to cheat on ex spec ops soldiers and IT specialists. It won’t end well for them or their lovers. Really enjoyed this one, especially since he took out Dad, and her brother too.

It was a 5 story, except for one glaring fault: "Well, I am glad to see the real you finally."

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So he dated and analyzed and assessed this woman's ethics, character, and morals. And getting to know her So Well he came to love, respect, and trust her. He even committed to a life long partnership; its called marriage. And then, suddenly, surprisingly, she's a lying cheating dishonest whore? Major fault in your character premise, or is it just another case of Martian Slut Ray? Maybe if he had been that diligent Before she became a cheating slut he wouldn't have had a failed marriage. But he got Exactly what he married, so he deserved everything the whore did to him. Well, at least tried to. Guess she'll be more careful about choosing the next pussy she marries.

many of these comments are a better read than the story itself

I really don't find this story possible. I am sure there would have been investigations and questions, so this ending is like this website: fantasies. ***

Over the top .no reality

fun. sure, not possible because the sheer volume of hacking that went on targeting one family but this was entertaining.

3*

Nothing new, sorry. And what did the ex-father-in-law do to deserve jail?

The ultimate incel fantasy. Control and badassery while living in mom's basement and sleeping with a blowup doll, only to discover literotica and find an opportunity to be an unappreciated navy seal in geek's clothing.

That was a total joy to read. Talk about food for the soul, you are an artist with words. I finally found a revenge story that I can enjoy frequently since it resonates with me so strongly and makes me laugh as well. This deserves five ⭐️ and a tip of the hat for writing, imagination and sense of humor. Thank you for making me feel so good this day.

GG

you obviously know how to turn a computer on. That is about the total sum of you knowledge. It's petty vindictive and wrong. Once the MC had protected his assets and come out on top it should have ended. Sick, not clever writing.

There was a high degree of overkIll here. Her family. with the exception of her brother, had not done him any harm so no need to hurt them.

Good story, I enjoyed it. A lot of the commenters don’t seem to understand what fiction means, but keep up the good work anyway.

Pretty good. Luckily she finally got enough money to buy a 38 snub nosed pistol. She had a good idea who was causing her problems. Having nothing to lose, she tracked her ex husband down and popped fore caps in his worthless ass. They held the funeral early on the next Saturday.

I agree qitu a few here, bea8des overkill and her brother what exactly did her parents do to deserve such a petty vindictive assault by a lame sad person you have made this story about. She choose wisely by having an affair when this apparent hacker robbed everyone else, and just a small note, doesn't matter how good a hacker you are a trace always remains a good hacker keeps their names out of the line, everyone can see a hack has happened just not by who. This story lame as it was reminds me on one written years ago on this site about a hacker pissed off, but was better written then, than this hack

No

Punishment for innocent people is a no no!!!

Like collateral damage

NO!!!

Well it is fiction after all. Not sure why he went after her father, the brother i can understand.

I do like a good story, and this is NOT a good story. The story is far too rushed for one to get any sense of who the characters are. Better luck in other endeavors for the author. Writing is most likely not one of those endeavors you may want to try. ;)

NTA

So there I go, oh

Can't make a wife out of a hoe

10 Big Blazing stars for a fun read. So many critics on Loving Wives, just ignore and delete their stupid comments. Thanks for the effort. Buster2U

Funny!

shvg6512 days ago

Pretty good. Luckily she finally got enough money to buy a 38 snub nosed pistol. She had a good idea who was causing her problems. Having nothing to lose, she tracked her ex husband down and popped fore caps in his worthless ass. They held the funeral early on the next Saturday.""""""" Was it the left or right fore arm she popped him with the caps? HEHEEH

I usually don't read 1 page flash stories but wondered why the score was below a 4. Thought it was okay, worthy of a 4.

Great Story!! Loved it!!

Lots of scorched earth, but a little too sterile. You *told* us about a bunch of stuff happening, but you showed us very little.