All Comments on 'Hailey Worked the Day Shift'

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CharlieB4CharlieB4over 10 years ago
Work it girl!

Lucky man with such a hot wife. Liked it 4*

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I am missing

something... This just does not flow for me ... I will wait several days and re-read... I do hope I enjoy

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
hear, hear charlie

my sentiments, exactly.

4*

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
best original

story this year loved the song stops shall I continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
That's all that mattered?

Boy are you a fool. Almost as dumb as this story.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Of course she fucked her customers. She was a stripper.

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Creative writing major in college. Made a career as a history teacher. My high school English teacher once told me that, should I ever encounter writer's block, try writing a pornographic scene. She said "a love scene," but I knew what she meant.