by xckid77
It seemed like the word "sweetie" was said every two words. The story got really annoying real fast.
I loved this start! Can't wait to know how she's going to train her! Please keep writing!
But really should be in non consent.
I enjoyed reading it though, and would certainly read more chapters.
Well done and have 5 stars to encourage you!
This has the makings of a good story, but it definitely belongs in the non--consent category.
This is a nonconsent story and does not belong in this category. Maybe it will after she is abused and given several rounds with the bitch's magical twat, turning her into a mindless sex doll. So, please move it to noncon, or maybe the saphotic love section.
You have a lot of talent, xckid77, but you should pay more attention to your presentation. Read everything through and don't rely on spell-checkers. This should also have been in Non-Consent, but for a newcomer, that is pardonable!
Well done - I look forward to reading much more. Five stars and welcome to Literotica.
Hi,
A good start to a promising non-consent story. I look forward to many more chapters
Hi!
this is a nice non-con story, i hope to read more of it very soon!!!
But it is a non con story.
Look forward to the next ( longer) chapter