All Comments on 'Haley's Visit 03 - The Lick-Off'

by FosterK

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Great story please keep writing I loved it ❤️

PappasleazePappasleaze7 months ago

first two chapters were great this not so much. Not of description of what was going on (yes we all know wation pussy) but it need more describing. the end was just okay. but I do thank you for sharing the story with us, and I hope to see what you do next real soon.

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Just another horny old goat writing and reading here. I wrote some of my works under the name of Foster Kaizen. Looking back at them now, I see they are full of errors. So, I'm going to re-work them gradually, as well as publishing some of my newer work. The best advice I ...