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Anonymousover 8 years agoSecond person
This would be a lot better if it wasn't written in the second person. That perspective works well when giving people directions, but not telling a story.
Myslutwife17over 6 years agoI Love Premise!
It was an interesting read of being a hot wife exhibitionist. To bad it was just a dream.
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