All Comments on 'Halftime Show'

I'm amazed. You told a story with 20 characters (complete with individualized personalities and backstory), kept all the action clear at all times, and maintained the heat through all 9 sections. Stupendous!

That was HOT!!!!! I know this is fiction but all those women I could see together. Tkank you very much. This was a way cool story. Keep up the excellent writing.

Cannot believe this story is over 12 years old and I never read it. Greatly loved this, I enjoyed it even better with football coming back into swing yesterday.

Luv the celebrities , luv the slice of comedy, & really wish this was the halftime show or at lease the actual game itself!