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by Alisonwonder

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Doyle907Doyle907over 1 year ago

Great build up to the tease at the end. I enjoyed the story a great deal.

LooneyLooneyover 1 year ago

Excellent start! Very nice writing style, hooking me in to want more. Curious about the authors intent, which side of the storyline is motivating her. Please continue

Olderguy4funOlderguy4funover 1 year ago

Great pacing and suspense. Even my heart was racing for her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good start, waiting for more!

roseyfingersroseyfingersabout 1 year ago

You get a lot of points for realism. It is pretty harsh.

robertjohnrobertjohnabout 1 year ago

Good first part to your story. Look forward to more.

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Iā€™m a 21 year old girl, recently came out of strict religion, and purity culture. I was in a lesbian relationship for about 6 months, and did a lot of sexual exploration, but still haven't had sex with a guy, not sure I want to. Iā€™m on here to explore more darker and difficult...

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