All Comments on 'Hall Pass or Bad Mistake'

by frisky50

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GinafrommaineGinafrommainealmost 2 years ago

Very hot. Loved the story. The five of them ought to try nude boating, skinny dipping, enjoying each other.

jay1964jay1964almost 2 years ago

hope to hear how things end

someoneothersomeoneother8 months ago

Only two published comments on the story? That suggests that author must be deleting comments which implies a lot of well-deserved negative comments.

AccelarVesterAccelarVester8 months ago

I would like the "rest of the story". What happened when they return? Did a permanent triad develope? Brother join in?

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well that's a divorce or two. There's the consequences you didn't mention and the apparent stupidity that was wide spread.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I was there right with them. Great story and maybe part 2 will be published.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Too bad he doesn't knock her up... It's better than knock her down!

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Struggling to have an active sex life when partner has health issues. I thought maybe writing a few stories would help to ease my pain.